Abortion is a controversial topic in our society and always somehow comes up in conversation. According to Augustyn et al., (2019), abortion is the expulsion of the fetus from the uterus before it reaches the stage of viability, which is 20 weeks gestation. This sounds to most people harsh and cruel to do. When a debate of whether abortion is right or wrong, the majority will go in the direction of it being wrong. When it does come up in conversations, I keep quiet or lie, as unlike the majority, I am in support of abortion. This is the same thing I did when my patient asked my opinion on it.
When it comes to assessing patients, physiotherapists first enquire about the patient’s history. Thus, asking personal questions, leading to patients confiding in you. Therefore during my block at a CHC, my patient confided in me about her 18 year old daughter that tried to have an abortion without her knowledge. Her daughter already has a one year old child. She told me how stupid her child was, how wrong it was, to try and have the baby aborted and it goes against her religion and the bible. According to her as long as the daughter is living under her roof, she will do what her mother says. The patient asked my opinion on the matter. I lied to the patient, and told her I also thought it was wrong but deep down inside I felt in this case it would be the right thing to do. I lied because I could see the patient felt strongly about this and I knew giving my honest opinion she would not listen or try to understand my way of thinking.
Although, I got more frustrated and irritated by the fact the patient kept going on about the abortion, even though I tried to change the subject. I wasn’t getting frustrated by her opinions on the topic, I got frustrated, as not once did she express what her daughter must be going through and that she understands why her daughter wants to have an abortion. She expressed her feelings more on the fetus, that she never meet and spoke about it, if it was also human. On the one hand, those against abortion claim that personhood is attained from the moment of fertilization when a new zygotic genome is assembled, or even earlier when a spermatid penetrates an ootid (Miklavcic & Flaman, 2017). On the other hand, those for abortion believe, not all human beings are human persons and as a result not all human beings have moral status (Miklavcic & Flaman, 2017). Therefore, in my opinion a fetus is seen as the developmental stages of human life and have potential to become a human being or person, but may not yet be a person.
After the session, I realised this was the shortest session I had with a patient compared to the other sessions with other patients. To be honest I just wanted to be done with the patient. I still treated the patient with respect during the whole session but if the session went on a bit longer than it did, I don’t think I would have held it in any longer. Pyysicians and nurses readily admit that empathy is more difficult to achieve in situations where morals collide and that their professional ideals feel strained (Hill, 2010). It was difficult for me to feel sorry for this patient and her social circumstances. I felt more sorry for the daughter. According to Hill (2010), clinicians are human, so moral and social judgments from the broader community can penetrate into the world of healthcare relationships. Thus when having moral differences, it can have an impact on the treatment, even though you don’t realise it. It is sometimes difficult to put your opinion on a subject matter aside. However, in this instance I kept quiet as I knew that this session was not the time and place to have a debate on the issue.
I felt in this case abortion would be the right thing to do, especially listeing to what the patient told me about their social circumstances and how her daughter fell pregnant. The patient is the breadwinner in the house, having to look after her mother, her daughter and grandson and her other son. They all living in a small shack and she is struggling to make ends meet. The patient also confided in me that her daughter was raped by a family friend and her child doesn’t want a baby by a rapist. As it will be a constant reminder of what happened to her. Thus it would be understandable why the daughter doesn’t want to bring another child in their current environment. During the treatment session, I started to become annoyed, as the patient kept going on how wrong abortion and quoting from the bible. I told the patient I needed to get the hot pack even though it was not indicated for the patient. As I needed a few seconds to collect myself, as I wanted to give the patient the best treatment as I give the other patients.
Although I disagree with her on this ethical matter, I understand her reason for thinking it is wrong. For her it is morally wrong and she was brought up in an religious environment where abortion is wrong. Those not in favour of abortion believe the fetus has life, and they too are human beings, thus also having rights. In the Bible, it states that life begins at conception in the chapter of Jeremiah “Before I formed you in the womb I knew you, before you were born I set you apart.” Another verse states that “Thou shall not kill.” in Exodus which is also often used as some people believe that abortion is wrong because the fetus is alive from day one. According to Jones & Chaloner (2007), a fetus has a right to life that is equal to that of any other human being, therefore society has a moral duty to protect it. However, in my opinion those against abortion are only seeing from the fetus point of view and not from the person’s point of view who is carrying it. In the Constitution Act 108 of 1996, it states all the rights of the women in South Africa, which relates to the right of life, dignity, privacy, freedom and security, the individual’s freedom of religion, belief and opinion, right to bodily and psychological integrity, and lastly the right to make decisions concerning reproduction and to security and control over her body (Pickles, 2013).
In South Africa abortion is legal. South Africa enacted the Choice on Termination of Pregnancy Act, which gives women of any age or marital status access to abortion services upon request during the first 12 weeks of pregnancy (Guttmacher, Kapadia, Naude Te Water & de Pinho, 1998). Therefore, the women in this coutry have the legal right to choice and bodliy integrity. A woman of any age may request termination of her pregnancy without having to advance reasons for such, on condition the pregnancy is not more than 12 weeks gestation. After 12 weeks gestation, termination of pregnancy can only be carried out under certain conditions. These are: pregnancy having been the result of rape, severe fetal abnormality, severe maternal physical or mental disease, or if continued pregnancy would result in severe social or economic conditions (Guttmacher, Kapadia, Naude Te Water & de Pinho, 1998).
Thus the woman has the right to choose what she wants to do with her body and the laws in South Africa backs her up in her decision. I don’t see myself as pro-choice or pro-life, I see myself in favour of the women’s rights. It is her body, so she should have the right to do what she see fit with her body. In this patient’s case if her child chooses to keep the baby it will grow up in an environment, where it will feel unloved and he/her needs won’t be meet.
References
Augustyn, A., Bauer, P., Duignan, B., Eldridge, A., Gregersen, E., Mckenna, A., Petruzzello, M.,……. & Zelazko, A. (2019). Abortion. Encyclopaedia Britannica. Retrieved from https://www.britannica.com/science/abortion-pregnancy on 15/09/2019.
Guttmacher, S., Kapadia, F., Naude Te Water, J. & de Pinho, H. (1998). Abortion Reform in South Africa: A Case Study of the 1996 Choice on Termination of Pregnancy Act. International perceptives on sexual and reproductive health, 24 (4): 191. Retrieved from https://www.guttmacher.org/journals/ipsrh/1998/12/abortion-reform-south-africa-case-study-1996-choice-termination-pregnancy-act on 15/09/2019.
Hill T. E. (2010). How clinicians make (or avoid) moral judgments of patients: implications of the evidence for relationships and research. Philosophy, ethics, and humanities in medicine : PEHM, 5, 11. doi:10.1186/1747-5341-5-11 on 26/09/2019
Jones, K. & Chaloner, C. (2007). Ethics of abortion: the arguments for and against. Nursing Standard. 21 (37): 45-48. Retrieved from https://www.semanticscholar.org/paper/Ethics-of-abortion%3A-the-arguments-for-and-against.-Jones-Chaloner/967b0736a3717dca27902c1a168b4252eae95580 on 15/09/2019
Miklavcic, J. J., & Flaman, P. (2017). Personhood status of the human zygote, embryo, fetus. The Linacre quarterly, 84(2), 130–144. doi:10.1080/00243639.2017.1299896 on 26/09/2019
Pickles, C. (2013). Termination-of-Pregnancy Rights and Foetal Interests in Continued Existence in South Africa: The Choice on Termination of Pregnancy Act 92 of 1996. Potchefstroom Electronic Law Journal/Potchefstroomse Elektroniese Regsblad, 15(5). doi: 10.4314/pelj.v15i5.11 on 26/09/2019
4 thoughts on “Abortion: Right or Wrong?”
Hi Jamie,
Content: I enjoyed your writing piece, and it is a controversial topic and indeed if people have their opinions and it is set in stone it does make it difficult to communicate with people with that type of mindset.
You explained the topic in detail and I like how you introduced the topic from the get go. I think you handled the situation in a very professional way. I agree with you and I like how your opinion did not influence your management of the patient.
Suggestions: I would like to hear more about your opinion on it, maybe you can even add literature on how abortions and different opinions can influence physiotherapy management?
Grammer:
“When a debate of whether instead of if abortion is right or wrong’
“conversation” conversations
instead of starting the sentence with “as” add a comma and carry on “As it will be a constant reminded of what happened to her.”
“and she was brought her in the environment where something like that is wrong.”- I do not understand what you want to say here.
“According to Jones & Chaloner, 2007, a fetus has a right to life that is equal to that of any other human being, therefore society has a moral duty to protect it. But for me those against abortion are only seeing from the fetus point of view and not from the person’s point of view who is carrying it.” try not to start your sentence with “but” rather conjoin the two sentences.Another suggestion, instead of using “for me” use “my opinion on…or something to that extent”
paragraph 5, line 3: ‘
“Therefore, the women in this country ”
last paragraph:
“what she sees fit with her body”
If you have any questions no hesitate to contact me.
Regards
Saschia
Hi Jamie. Thank you for sharing your writing piece. It is definitely a relatable topic as I was in a similar situation with a patient. I realized we do not always realize what the next patient is going through and sometimes not everyone finds common ground on certain topics. It is sometimes difficult trying to get your point across to someone as everyone has their own perspective on certain things at the end of the day.
Content: I liked how you started by explaining the definition of abortion followed by your experience with the topic of abortion in a clinical setting. I also liked how you reflected on your own beliefs about abortion and how those may have shifted after being exposed to the topic in a clinical setting as each patient has their own point of view. Your topic definitely coincide with the options that were given and spoken about in class – I definitely understand your dilemma and at the end of the day, the patient has rights which they can choose what to do
with whether it agrees with your beliefs or not. You could also elaborate on the bible verse which speaks about abortion and not just mentioning that there is a verse.
argument: you have made fairly good points coming from both point of views in although not all of them are supported with references as this could then make your writing stronger. You could also mention the patients perspective on the whole situation more in depth and what could have happened if you did not lie (this could give another point of view and bring up challenges that may have arised making your writing piece stronger). Have you considered looking at literature that states as health professionals how do we handle our beliefs when treating patients, as we can not just treat them differently when a topic discussion is not agreed upon? How do we not let our beliefs and values impact on the treatment of patients?
references: based on the references you have, they all seem correct although I think you can add one or two more references to support your claims Pickles, C. (2013). Termination-of-Pregnancy Rights and Foetal Interests in Continued Existence in South Africa: The Choice on Termination of Pregnancy Act 92 of 1996. Potchefstroom Electronic Law Journal/Potchefstroomse Elektroniese Regsblad, 15(5). doi: 10.4314/pelj.v15i5.11 (you can check this out – talks about the rights of abortion)
writing:
line 3 – “if” can be changed to “whether”
line 8- knowledge is spelt incorrectly
I hope that this could be of some help,
All the best with your final submission
Erin
Thank you for sharing your writing and your opinion on this topic. This is definitely a controversial topic world wide and everyone has their own strong opinions about the matter. You were faced with a tough situation and seemed to have handled it well. It’s difficult to know when to share your opinion on the topic, agree with the patient’s opinion or just stay impartial. It is also difficult to know what a patient is going through and fully understand their social circumstances surrounding the situation. This is topical as many of us are faced with such dilemmas in clinical practice as well as other dilemmas that challenge our set of personal beliefs.
I like how you introduced your experience and added a definition in the introduction. This gives the reader a clear direction of what is to follow in the writing. Your argument is clear regarding whether abortion is right or wrong, however the argument could be strengthened by using more literature to back up the two sides of the argument, particularly the reasons why abortion could be seen as wrong by some people. You mention the bible, consider using literature to substantiate some other reasons why people may see abortion as being “wrong”.
Consider reflecting on what you would do differently if you were faced with this situation again? Consider looking at literature regarding health professionals role in such situations and whether their beliefs and views may influence treatment.
Corrections:
Paragraph 2 “Knowledge” correct spelling
References: Current references all look right. Consider doing some more research on the suggestions above and therefore adding to your references.
Keep up the good work, I hope these suggestions will help you going forward in the final submission.
Content:
Dear Jamie. The topic relates to the module content on life or death and wrong and right. This is a very sensitive topic no matter the race or religion. There will always be 2 sides. People who believe it to be wrong and those who believe that it could be right. I like how you make me think of the rights of the fetus and that of the mother. Usually I think only of the rights of the fetus and not the rights of the person carrying the fetus. I also enjoyed reading about how you as an individual feel about this topic and what your response was in this very difficult situation. Consider maybe researching how other health care practitioners feels about discussing this topic in the clinical setting.
Clinical practice:
The topic relates to your experience in the clinical setting. Maybe discuss how your feelings impacted on the patient’s treatment in more detail.
Art:
Include art that related to the topic. Maybe use a picture that can relate to both opinion about abortion. Example: https://www.google.com/url?sa=i&source=images&cd=&ved=2ahUKEwiqu73k3-bkAhUnzoUKHdWwBykQjRx6BAgBEAQ&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.outsidethebeltway.com%2Fsupport-for-abortion-rights-grows-as-extremist-views-harden%2F&psig=AOvVaw32PN-SOWK7oH81vEDPRhLR&ust=1569321357291015
Evidence:
You have used appropriate literature to support your claims and it makes your argument very strong. First in text reference change to “According to Augustyn et al, (2019), abortion is the expulsion…”. Paragraph 5 change second reference of (Guttmacher, Kapadia, Naude Te Water & de Pinho, 1998) to (Guttmacher et al., 1998).
Language:
The reflection is really well written. The introduction and conclusion makes it easy to follow your thoughts and discussion. To make your argument even stronger consider linking words between paragraphs such as therefore, moreover, furthermore, however etc.
Digital literacy:
Consider using hyperlinks for your reference list which makes it easy to go read up more about the topics discussed in your writing. Good use of tags for your writing piece. Remember to include art as discussed above to make argument even stronger.
Thank you for sharing
Agatha