One thought on “Vehus, Tiril, “City Bike- a Health promoting measure””
> I like how you have connected the cheapness and accessibility of city bikes to the accessibility and cheapness of health in Norway, however, your assignment does not touch on the patients’ point of view or perspective about the health system in Norway. Are the patients satisfied with the health system? Do they feel like there are some areas that need to be improved? These are some of the points that you may think of.
> Writing-wise, please check for spelling mistakes and grammar. I have noted some consistency in the use of citys instead of city’s.
> Make use of inverted commas for a quote instead of <>
One thought on “Vehus, Tiril, “City Bike- a Health promoting measure””
> I like how you have connected the cheapness and accessibility of city bikes to the accessibility and cheapness of health in Norway, however, your assignment does not touch on the patients’ point of view or perspective about the health system in Norway. Are the patients satisfied with the health system? Do they feel like there are some areas that need to be improved? These are some of the points that you may think of.
> Writing-wise, please check for spelling mistakes and grammar. I have noted some consistency in the use of citys instead of city’s.
> Make use of inverted commas for a quote instead of <>