One thought on “Bsrat, Dahlak. “Interdisciplinary Approaches”.”
Content :
I think your content for this assignment is spot on. It gave me a better idea of the health system in Norway. You create a clear picture and understanding of how the system works. The content correlates well with the picture you chose.
Arguments and claims :
The arguments and claims you made supports the idea of this assignment and what you try to convey to the reader.
References :
Good references that support the claims and statements you made. I am not sure of what referencing style you use. Just make sure that your referencing format is correct and correlates with the style that you have to use.
Writing :
The writing of this assignment is good. There are some minor grammar errors. If you correct these I don’t think there is a lot someone can still criticize on.
Well done with a good assignment. It gave me a lot of insight and opened my mind to how different health systems can be. I think you have a good argument and it is well supported.
Good luck with the rest of your studies.
Lize-Mari Burger
One thought on “Bsrat, Dahlak. “Interdisciplinary Approaches”.”
Content :
I think your content for this assignment is spot on. It gave me a better idea of the health system in Norway. You create a clear picture and understanding of how the system works. The content correlates well with the picture you chose.
Arguments and claims :
The arguments and claims you made supports the idea of this assignment and what you try to convey to the reader.
References :
Good references that support the claims and statements you made. I am not sure of what referencing style you use. Just make sure that your referencing format is correct and correlates with the style that you have to use.
Writing :
The writing of this assignment is good. There are some minor grammar errors. If you correct these I don’t think there is a lot someone can still criticize on.
Well done with a good assignment. It gave me a lot of insight and opened my mind to how different health systems can be. I think you have a good argument and it is well supported.
Good luck with the rest of your studies.
Lize-Mari Burger