Your writing piece is well organised and it brings your argument across in a clear and concise manner which made it enjoyable to read. I definitely agree that physical activity benefits our health. There is a clear discription of the picture provided and the text ties in with the picture. I clearly understand the argument. However, I do not completely understand how this reflects the health system of Norway. I would like to read more about the health system and not so much about the health of citizens of Norway. Have you considered how the health of health care practitioners can influence the health system? Furthermore, it would be quite interesting to know more about the health system from the patients point of view. There are a few spelling mistakes but that is minor. Nonetheless, it is a great atempt to the assignment, well done.
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Your writing piece is well organised and it brings your argument across in a clear and concise manner which made it enjoyable to read. I definitely agree that physical activity benefits our health. There is a clear discription of the picture provided and the text ties in with the picture. I clearly understand the argument. However, I do not completely understand how this reflects the health system of Norway. I would like to read more about the health system and not so much about the health of citizens of Norway. Have you considered how the health of health care practitioners can influence the health system? Furthermore, it would be quite interesting to know more about the health system from the patients point of view. There are a few spelling mistakes but that is minor. Nonetheless, it is a great atempt to the assignment, well done.